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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
God, I thought I wrote dark and tragic stories. Ginny is just ruined here. She'll live for her kids, but she can't be far away for suicidal at the end there.

This was very good. And the emotions were just right and I understand why you picked Neville because of the ending, but basically the same story could have been written with say Dean or Michael Corner and you'd have had the advantage of there backgrounds with Ginny.

I'm not sure Neville would have ever felt overshadowed by Harry. He's just be glad for Harry's friendship. Dean or Michael maybe or someone else maybe.

THis was very good though. And it was an excellent response to the challenge. I'm giving it a 10.

Author's Response: I have to disagree with your point of Dean and Micheal... it is very different. Through the last 6 Harry Potter books we have all grown to love Neville and he is becoming more and more a main character. Dean and Micheal are just background characters.

We have history with Neville and he is very overshadowed by Harry (like Ron is) because of his grandmother, Harry's braveness, his father, ect, ect. Neville is a very overshadowed person.

And why would Dean or Micheal feel overshadowed? They hardly spend time with Harry and hardly know him, while Nevilla does and loves Ginny and Ginny loves Harry. Bang. Another thing Harry is overshadowed about.

Thanks for your review.


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