He retreated like poison healed by an antidote. - God, do I know some guys like that or what! :D great line though, you should trademark that, cuz that was excellent ;)
"That boy who could not love." - such a sad, sad last sentence, but ultimately, the best one you could have possibly written there :)
This was such a touching one shot, it made me feel happy inside, for some reason, not sad. I guess most people feel sad after reading this... but it didnt saden me, you played Hermione's character out beautifully, her strong resolve and her determination... it was Hermione, and I think thats what's brought a smile to my face :)
Draco was perfect, so true to his character, and so cold, I love it when people write him as cold and not some happy carefree guy, cuz he's far more complicated than that - something which you again showed to its full potential.
I love your writing style, its so beautiful and its just wonderful to read :) you're going to get a lot more reviews from me in the near future as I catch up on your work, so I'm sorry if I bug you lol, but you're amazing, dont ever stop writing, cuz you can make it to professional writing very easily :) *hugs*
10/10, fav list and a packet of chocolate frogs for you hehe :D Love, Kate oxox
Author's Response: Hello again, my dear!! Trademark it? Ha ha. :-)
Oh, thank you!! I always like to link up my title in the conclusion of my story.
I wrote this one ages ago, when I was new to the whole romance writing, and was still stuck on dark stuff. This was an experiment for me to see if I could write romance, so I'm glad you liked it. Oh, perfect - I'd hate it if Hermione strayed out of character inside my writing.
Oh, I agree - Draco is so complicated. I hate it when people write him without any depth, because its so wrong and just spoils the whole story. Most people are complete faliures when it comes to writing Draco - he's complicated which makes him harder to portray, and if you can't write him, then whats the point in borthering? However, there are several people on this site who I admire greatly for capturing Draco's character acurately - CelticKisses, for example, a writer of which I know you're a great fan. :-) I'm sure that you write him well too, as I'll likely see when I check out your fics.
Bug me? Lol - I love reviews!! They are always so encouraging, and yours are delightful. I'm flattered that you spend the time first reading my stories, and then leaving a comment as wonderful as this. Really? You think so!! I do hope - one of my reviewers has reserved a shelf for all my novels to be placed upon one day, lol.
Oooh, chocolate frogs? *grabs and then scoffs* Why thank you!!