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Review:Magic_Marker says:
I loved the idea behind this. Your other era fics are wonderful, especially since I'm on a major historical fiction binge nowadays.

My only issue is that in the beginning, it seemed like you were explaining the story to the reader rather than letting it unfold through feelings, images, etc. Try to concentrate more on what the characters are feeling than what is actually happening, and we'll get the idea.

Great job! Be sure to update Protector of the Crown soon! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always on a historical fiction binge it seems like.

The beginning was actually written after the entire dialogue sequence when I realized, "Hmm...I can't just have her go in there and kill him...She needs to have reason." And so came the beginning of the fic. It's my first One-Shot (As you can see from the lack of published stories...I've got one chapter waiting on my newest fic that I've co-written with one of my friends and then a new PTC Chapter will be waiting...promise!)

Thanks for the Review and I'm glad you liked it!

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