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Review:dim at best says:
It was a great one-shot, really and truly :) Great job for a first attempt at angst!

I don't think that this is the stereotypical angst fic... it's more 'sad' than anything else.. but I see angst's qualifications within the story and they were done quite well. It's just that it's not as dramatic/pronounced as in truly angsty fics. (I've read some angst, but have only written one.. and that was a songfic, so I'm honestly nowhere near an expert in this department. lol )

The fic had a slightly poetic edge. Not that it rhymes or flows by a rhythm, but in the way you used imagery and the ways you strung words together. I could give you a bunch of examples, but I think the best one would be the last sentence. For some reason it just screamed poetic to me... the whole one-shot is in fact very beautifully written (how it's composed, the flow... thoughts, flashback, thoughts, flashback, etc.)

All in all, great job Lane!! I loved it. :D

- Terri

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Terri! I see what you mean about it being more sad than dramatic, and I'm glad you think it fits in the category anyway. Wow, you thought it was poetic? Thank you! It's hard to look at my own fic and see that, but I think I understand. I like things to flow and love describing things. Thank you again, and I'm very glad to know you liked it, because it's so different from what I ususally write.

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