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Review:Kbugmc1229 says:
That was cute.just a few things you might want to consider. There are quite a few grammerical errors so you might want to re-edit. Especially focus on putting ending marks on your sentences(.?!, ect) Also the formatting is a bit distracting and things flow better if you are not breaking everything up. Each sentence doesn't need to start its own paragraph. I really liked Jame's temper at the end. it shows where Harry gets it from although I think that Lily's parents reaction wouldn't have been as relaxed. One more thing.what is the time frame for the Dursleys are they married yet or are they just dating?

Author's Response: It wasn't each sentence that was starting a new paragraph, it was a different subject or thought, so they had to.
The Dursleys are just dating in this.

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