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Review:Anony_Mouse says:
Beautiful chapter. I really love how you did this.

That it was in Neville PoV.oh gosh, I really do feel for the guy. He has had so much happen to in and this too? Harry and Ginny. Dead. You've got his voice down very well-simpler than the other chapters, but that's how Neville would think, right? ;-)

I also love the description. You've done a great job with that, to be sure, but my favorite part of all would probably have to be the last part:
He turned his attention to Professor Dumbledore’s tomb. It was nearby. Ron told him it was on purpose because both Professor Dumbledore and Harry would have liked it. He had to agree with that.
You're so right-Dumbledore and Harry together is the way things should be. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really trying to ge tthe next part just right. More viewpoints from their friends and an interesting happening.

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