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Review:firefawn says:
*claps* Oh I love this story! I can't belive that it didn't win! The last half of it was my favorite, but that is to be expected because Luna is one of my favorite characters, and I love stories where she is in them. The only constructive thing that I could say is that the summary for this ought to be expanded a bit, so that people's interest in it is enticed by the subject matter, and by the Harry/Luna pairing. It's an unusual pairing and a one-shot like this would get a lot of hits on the story finder if it was listed like that, at least I am guessing that it would because I have done searches for that quite a few times, and so few things come up. Lupin was pretty funny at the end of this, and I enjoyed all of the quirks that Luna had, such as how she made her own perfume and was an excellent flier. Narcissa was also a welcome surprise in the story, so great work on working her into this. :) 10/10

Author's Response: Per your suggestion i have expanded the summary a bit in an attempt to draw people in to read it. thanks for the great suggestion. I thought that after the 5th book JKR might be planning to pair Harry and Luna together so that is why I put it in this story. I had heard that she was going to kill off one charater, and I was saddly anticipating it be Luna after Harry fell in love with her. Emotionally for him, I think that would have been even worse than losing Serius. Imagine my surprise when she killed off another character that hurt him as much. i was really hoping to cast Luna in a different light away from school, and have Harry be the one that took the chance to look beyond all of her outward behaviors she exibited at school. I hope i was able to do that for you. I have considered writing another Harry/Luna story in the future, so I'll have to let you know if I do. Thanks for being such a wondeful reader, writer, and reviewer. i am really looking forward to your story updates as well. Happy reading (and writing).

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