Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:al3x says:
Ooo an A? Well done =D I thought it was really good but I got confused because at the start it says shes grounded but she works for the ministry? So surely her parents cant still ground her? =S . I didn't realise really that this wasn't originally hermione and thought it was weird wiff her change of hair colour but then i got it=] and she changes her hair with the weather in assuming? I thought it was really well written and especially the colours giving connations of the months =] Why did she die? I wondered why it was saying life was coming to an end...I didn't get that? I loved the story thought it was really good =D Oh yes, were they playing quidditch with a football because a football hit her but the dude was playing quidditch? Anyways, great story =D
Alex xx

Author's Response: Ah, she's a "kid" then I suppose, as the year progresses, she grows up and that's how the ministry gets involved... it's her job. My parents still ground me... wish they wouldn't like... *glares thru floor at rents*
Yeah, I thought the hair was slightly weird too, but I had to bring a bit of symboism into my original story, but I thought about whether getting rid of this point in the HPFF version, but I decided to keep it in, cause I lurv it!
Teehee! She didn't die. She just collapsed into a cold faint, becoz of the cold itself and her broken heart. But it leaves an air of suspense becoz no1 knows if she'll survive... maybe the guy will come back and save her... I'll leave that to urs and other peeps imaginary tho.
But I'm glad you liked it though. A lot of peeps in my class wanted to read the original and most came back saying it was good... I think mine was the longest in the class as well.
O.M.G! Is the football still mentioned? It's supposed to be a Quaffle, but they're supposed to be playing "invisible" Quidditch in the park, yes!
Thanx for reviewing hun! I appreciate it! :)


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 689
Submit Report: