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Review:dim at best says:
This chapter has got to be one of my favourites in this story :D It makes me sad to think that things are kind of wrapping up...

Anyways, the beginning was HYSTERICAL. Cho/Ginny catfght, muggle-style, with Harry, being a boy, just enjoying the show. LOL. Loved it. It was very well-written too, fast paced and lively and definitely very imaginative. Eloise's one-liner at the end of it was also sooo funny and just closed the moment beautifully. Great job!!

The Harry/Eloise bonding scene somehow called the movie 'What a Girl Wants' to mind. Maybe I'm just weird that way :P But anyways, it was very nicely done - awkward, but with that family connection underneath.

Cho... well, we already know my feelings on that witch, now don't we? :P

I'm sooo happy that Hermione and Ron will be able to work things out, learning from Ginny's mistakes with Harry. Hooray for R/Hr and future stubborn children with bushy red hair!

And the end of the chapter was absolutely touching, and so sweet. It was, for me, the first time that the pain Harry must have been feeling from his isolation from everyone really hit home. It had that bittwersweet aura, and was a tearjerker, but a happy one.


- Terri

Author's Response: First off thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so sorry it has taken me this long to respond! I am really happy to hear that it is one of your fave in the story though!

I am so happy that everyone found the catfight to be humourous, that was really my intent and so I am glad it worked out well. It was really hard for me to write the action scenes though, just because it isn't something I normally do!

The Harry/Eloise scene didn't really form in my mind as a knock-off of that movie, but I do watch that movie often so I guess I can understand why it might mirror it a bit. Ooops!

Cho, yes, she is quite a piece of work, that is for sure!

Hermione and Ron will definitely be able to work through their problems, and of course they need that bundle of children!

I am so pleased you liked the ending of the chapter, it was really important for me to write, for many reasons, but I think it really made everything seem much more real for him! Thank you so much again for this brilliant review!

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