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Review:greatest of 'em all says:
More like my chapter! Yay! I must tell you this, I really really enjoyed reading this chapter. Merope was in her element, wasn't she? Oh, I love this new, innocent, carefree, obsessed but above all optimistic Merope. You've succeeded in painting her as a very contrasting but an honest and believable character. Cheers! I love the determination with which Merope has set out and the part about Morfins comment planting an idea in Merope's head was really nice. Brought out the genious in you! I have to say that as a reader this chapter was a lot more fun than the previous and that's a good sign as it shows you've improved manifold in a space of a record one chapter! Off to read the next!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that I've kept Merope in character through this, it was kind of tough to remember where exactly she came from and how exactly she should act around others, particularly around someone where she can take control of them. Her being optimistic and carefree is just the whole 'freedom' thing going to her head.

I really enjoy your reviews and comments, and I look forward to seeing more of them. Thank you for your time!!

Gin


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