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Review:greatest of 'em all says:
Ah! An evil streak in our helpless Merope? Very ingenious, the way you've made Merope behave in this chapter. As I read on I felt a sort of will developing in Merope and in some instances she seemed very confident about her actions. I think the freedom part got to her too quickly... I would have expected her to act indesicive for a while... confused as to what to do with her life. The stroke of brilliance regarding the Love Potion was too quick for my taste. I would have thought that using magic would be her last resort considering how much she wished to disassociate herself from magic in the previous chapter.

Nevertheless, your lovely narration kept urging me to read further and well, I'm off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, a very evil streak. Her heritage does shine through. I know I can fix this one up more, like you've said that it was going to fast. This was more of a filler chapter, as I was VERY eager to get to the whole enchanting Tom. It will probably go slower from here on out. However her freedom went to her head, and she wanted to use it before any one came to stop her.

Aw, lovely narration is subject to a lovely review. Thanks alot greatest!


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