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Review:dim at best says:
You stopped correcting the 'Horocruxes' thing after the diamond partition and viewpoint switch :) There are two cases where they're still with the extra 'o'.

So, anyways, getting to the chapter itself, once again you play the imagery card, and use it masterfully. My favourite was the green inkwell that reflected rainbows - that was so beautiful and poetic...

The chapter, like the intro, gives off the theme of change, and I'm so jealous of your ability to somehow carry a mood like that within a story. It's so much harder than including a humourous theme, or a romantic theme, because it's more subtle. You've got some mad writing skills. :P

I'm hoping sooo badly that Harry and Rora get together again. They were honestly so perfect for eachother. And it made me kinda swoon a little when Harry, despite having been an idiot and breaking up with Rora two years previous, recognized her by something like her walk. I want a boy to know me so well that he recognises my walk *sighs*

Also, the interaction between Parvarti and Hermione was sooo funny and held the kind of scathing-ness that the R/Hr arguments have, which was truly a joy to read.

♥ Terri

Author's Response: Ahhhh! Horcrux spelling strikes again xD I'll fix it ASAP. You know, I think maybe J.K. Rowling should just change the spelling for me . . . my way seems much cooler, doesn't it? ;)

Thank you so much for all the complements, I'm grinning from ear to ear (but what's new). You're much to sweet xD And I'm glad you liked it, too, your opinion means a TON to me. If you didn't like something I'd have to trash it, lol ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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