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Review:dim at best says:
Blair is going to have a complete meltdown soon, and I don't think any good is going to come out of it. *shakes head sadly*

Poor, poor, Oliver. I want to just hug him and make him feel better. I understand why Blair had to shut him down - but still... *sigh*. Any chance you can stick a fangirl in named Terri who'll snog Oliver senseless? lol.

Riley - man he's a loose canon. Violent too. And a right brute. He reminds me a lot of Malfoy, only less evil. But the temperament is still there. Jacey made me smile when she told him off like she did - I think there's some tension between those two. As in, maybe she likes him but thinks he's an imbecile. And... while I'm at it I'll shoot off a couple more romantic predictions/wild guesses. Riley, harboring a crush for Blair, will see her meltdown and kiss her. The kiss will be seen by Jacey, who will throw a fit and smack Riley upside the head and get Blair fired. Oliver, with nobody to love anymore, will turn to his many fangirls cheering on the side and pick out a lone girl by the name of Terri and together, Terri and Oliver will live happily ever after.

What? No? Well it could happen... :D

I also really liked the contrast you had with the other chapter in having Blair hate the rain. We'd just read that Oliver loved it, and the opposite-ness of it all shows how mis-matched they are and how Oliver belongs with a girl who likes rain, like me. (No? It doesn't? Darn.)

Anyways, great update. The interaction between Riley and Blair was wonderfully written, and you conveyed Blair's frustrations in a very poetic way that somehow emphasized how confused she was. The writing style at the end, with all the questions, was executed very nicely and you shouldn't change it, ever.

Wow. This review is all over the place. Sorry about that... I'm in a strange mood that's kind of giddy since I still need to read the latest Aurora trilogy chapter.

♥ Terri

PS. Three references, now four, to Me/Oliver action in a single review. Must be a record. :P

Author's Response: TERRI YOU ARE CRAZYYYYY!!!! That's probably the longest review anyone's ever left me . . . ahhhhh, I love you =P
Hey, maybe I'll name a character after you! I any case, this review of yours made my day and I can't stop grinning. You're the coolest, m'dear. Now go post a chapter to your own story!

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