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Review:dim at best says:
FIRST REVIEW!! * does happy dance *

This is definitely the funnest, wackiest, take on the crazy Black family I have ever read. It was rich with humour and insanity and general drama - and I loved every bit of it.

A great introduction with at a good length to boot :)

So - this takes place the summer of Sirius' sixth year, eh? I'm excited to see what canon twists you're going to make in order to make way for Andromeda's influence. The Marauder's map thing was genius, and I honestly can't wait to see what else you've imagined for Andy here.

She really is quite the drama queen, isn't she? lol

I found a small grammatical mistake: I considered that for a few seconds before steadily shaking my head. “No. I want it to remind my sister of what she's become and what she's doing.” She swallowed, trying hard to keep my tears at bay. I didn't want to cry, not in front of Sirius. He was like a brother to me and if he thought I was hurt I knew he'd do something stupid. I couldn't afford to take that risk, not for either of us.. The 'she' should be an 'I'. :) There are also some small canon inconsistencies regarding the Black sisters ages, but I think that can be overlooked since it's really minor.

This fic has some great originality and boatloads of potential. The bat uncle has got to be my favourite, though. Takes batty to a new level, doesn't it? :D

Congrats for the second time on making Trusted status! You totally deserve it Lina!

♥ Terri


Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much Terri

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