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Review:Anony_Mouse says:
I think it was a nice insight into Remus and Tonk's relationship!!! It was sweet and I really enjoyed it, since I've been getting fonder of that ship lately.

However, here's a few nitpicky grammar stuff, if you don't mind: some of the sentences in the beginning might flow better if you combined more of them together or something. Not so much that they're run-on's, but that they're are a little more interesting. I also noticed that you forgot to put a comma or a period, after a few lines in dialogue. Those were the main things, but altogether, it was a pretty good job!!!

Please don't be offended by the grammar comments. It was a nice fanfic, especially for your very first fanfiction! I love your insight into Remus and Tonks; not many people can do that! I'm sure your fanfics will approve more with time (but then again, who's don't? ;)).

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm happy I get good reviews, but I also like it that you give some ideas how to improve it. So, no I'm not offended. As I'm not a native English speaker comments about the language will hopefully improve my English too and not only my stories. ;)
I will have a look at the things you pointed out and try to fix them some time soon.

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