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Review:JamesandLily4ever says:
Dude, come on! :D I liked it! The problem is that you make Jaci (or Jacky) very Mary-sue-ish. I like the idea of her being Harry's Godmother and Kristie being there as well. Nicely written! Keep up the great work!

P/s: Dude, here's my rating: 9/10. Add up the chapters, I'm here to review and rate! (I bet the rate will go up, so yeah...)

Author's Response: Here's my problem. I have no earthly idea what Mary Sue is, I don't even know who she is. Her attitude is kinda rough around the edges because she's a hit wizard. I don't know if you remember, but in the first chapter I call her an auror. When I read POA again, I decided to make her a hit wizard. Oh, and I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. The next chapter is giong to be a little out there, but I think that Ron and Hermione would do it, just to make Harry comfortable again. Having Kristie at Hogwarts was one of the only ways I could think of to have Harry go back, you know the whole 'playing the hero' thing. BTW did you hear, just a rumor that I heard that the 7th book was coming out 21 of July? ten days before Harry's birthday Anyway, I'll update soon, k?

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