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Review:firebreathingradishes says:
Hello! I'm here to leave you a review. :) Lovely start. Lester Prentice is my type of character- evil, vicious, yet very suave. Oh and poor Ron! It's nice to read a non-H/Rfluff story where Ron is the one of the main characters. And I was very surprised when the gun turned out to be a water gun instead.

The two short interjections about Harry and Luna are rather confusing.
Perhaps, it's just me, but those two scenes didn't really add anything to the chapter besides just being a breaker in between the fight section.

Speaking of the fight scene, I really like how you write action. I must say that your Luna is characterized wonderfully. She's so Luna-y that it reminds me of JK Rowling almost! " Part of her dress had to be tugged out of a sticky patch of Golden Syrup. She didn’t comment, just turned to pick up her notebook and hat. The backs of her bare knees were sticky too." This little detail was cute. :D

Great work and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

You aren't the first to bring up the two little scenes. All I'll say is with hindsight they might have been a mistake.

I hope you'll enjoy the rest,
Emmy


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