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Review:dim at best says:
Oh man...

What a chapter.

This chapter just like pwned all the other chapters lol. It could have been longer *hint hint :P * but it was flippin amazing all the same.

Constructively, I think that some things could have been described more in detail or set up a bit more. For example, the Ron/Hermione thing about having children. It seeemed a bit sudden and out of place within the chapter, especially since there was little to no leading in from previous chapters regarding their relationship problems.

I'm not saying that I didn't enjoy that aspect or anything, I loved this chapter! It had EVERYTHING in it. Harry and Eloise's first meeting, an argument between Harry and Cho, Ron/Hermione development, and a FANTABULOUSLY written kiss between Harry and Ginny that had such a great lead-in and was so so so perfect.

*sigh*

But the trouble that relationship will cause... oh boy. I'm practically dancing I'm so excited for the next chapter.

Thanks for updating so fast! Take as long as you need for the next one, Merlin knows that you've been like the best updating author ever for her readers lately.

- Terri

Author's Response: It was quite a chapter, thanks so much for taking the time to read. I know that it could have been longer, but I actually got sick and I wanted to give you all an update.

I am glad that you took some time to leave some criticsm. I will have to attempt to leave more detail in the next chapter. As for the R/Hr issue, I know it was sudden but I will developing that storyline more. This is the beginning of their relationship problems. I am so happy that you loved the chapter otherwise and that you enjoyed the kiss.

Yes, things are going to be complicated and I will do my best to make sure the next chapter is better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *HUGS*

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