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Review:dim at best says:
YAY!! Another update!!

I was a bit angry with Eloise in her treatment of Ginny. I can admire her for going to Harry, and see where her arguments are stemming from, but geez what a brat. I still like her, of course, but I think she needs to learn a little more respect for her Mum.

The fact that Ginny kept documents for Harry so that he could get to know their daughter was so so so sweet. And, while its purposes within the story are clear, it's also believable enough that the reader doesn't think it's just for plot. It's something the characters might actually do.

Cho, while thankfully is not in this chapter, still irks me just by Harry's offhand musings that include her. I really hate that woman.

- Terri

Author's Response: YAY!!! I updated again!

I know, Eloise is being difficult, but that is how teenagers act. I know she is being a brat, but on the other hand it is understandable considering her life.

I am so happy that you liked Ginny's saving of those momentos, it seemed like something someone would do, a way to hold on. I have had that planned from the very beginning!

Cho is awol in this chapter, but she is just biding her time, trust me she will return with a vengence!!!! Thanks for reviewing as always! *HUGGLE ATTACKLE*


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