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Review:Dragonette (thought I was logged in, but...) says:
I think that this is beautiful, although I don't EVER ship Draco/Hermione 'cept w/ S.A.B...even still. I love this song so much, and this plot really fit!

HOWEVER, I think that this fic could benefit a LOT from expansion. More details. A bit more set up, even if it's more towards the middle. More about the fight, maybe, or more about how Draco and HErmione got together. What is this confusion about the engagement party? I don't get it!

Best,
Cheers,
Dragonette

Author's Response: lol, yes I love my draco/hermione ships...I love reading them too...bad habit of mine.

I'm not sure if I will expand, probably clarify the engagement party bit, that was a last minute bunny, he hoped in the door when the party was full blast.

essentially Draco had asked hermione to marry him. He told his parents, and the gang were throwing the two of them a party.

It's a little problematic since this pulls from other stories I've written too, but not all of them...maybe I should put up a code.

So at the party they were celebrating and the death eaters burst in. Side note, Draco killed his parents who were there to watch and laugh.

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