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Review:almost_witch says:
I am trying to compare this to other stories I have read... but nope. Not one compares to this, and I am very glad there isn't. I love how original the storyline is, I love how it wasn't really fluffy at all, and how Luna comes up with some really wierd things, including a nice therey about dear old fudge.

Definately a nice, short and sweet story that was well written. Absolutely no spelling mistakes, the set up, and eveything made it so easy to read, really, I can barely find thing to pick on.

The only thing I can say, is maybe, make Neville a bit more hesitant... maybe more mumbling? Stuttering? Or being ore unsure about something. Otherwise, it's all great :D

I do like how different this story is, it's great to see another original piece instead of the same story with a different author which we see fartoo often around here.

Well done,

Almost xx

Author's Response: I was going for the original and going of my own character in writing a fluff piece. It's been awhile since I have and for me Trevor helped me into the mood. Who could resist such a prince? But where I lacked was in the Luna/Neville department-- and Jackie wrote that part sooo wonderfully. I'm glad you enjoyed it-- and I'm even more glad to see your name on my review's page. Huggle dear. ~~juls

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