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Review:GinnyWeasleyPotter(too lazy to log in) says:
Here I am, ready to review, just like I said I would!

I have to start out by saying that you two did very, very well working together. Luna was very in-canon, and so was Neville. I think that a little more detail would have been good throughout the fic, it was rather short, but still very good. Oh, I can imagine Neville dancing with his toad, lol. When you end quotation marks, instead of putting a comma at the end, put a period. I liked Neville's uncertainty and Luna's bluntness. But, like I said before, a bit more detail would have added to the story. Good job, both of you!
GinnyWeasleyPotter

Author's Response: Thanks Lauren-- this was a story I started on a challenge from Mon, and I just couldn't finish it because I really have never written Neville or Luna- I'm unclear about them. The Trevor part- me I'll admit. nothing like a frog to kick start a relationship- I am so glad that jackie decided to write it with me, expand on the actual chars- beyond my poor hapless frog. Thanks again for the review. ~~juls and jackie

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