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Review:goddessofsnark says:
Feels...rushed. Like you were trying to spit it all out...without really thinking about what you were writing, you just wanted to get everything done. It could be fleshed out so much more, go much more in-depth. Mary Sues that fully realize what they are can make for some of the most amusing and good fics because they don't take themselves seriously-it's like a B movie, they're amazing, because they realize what they are.

Go back and flesh it out! Add more! You could definitly get at least a few chapters out of this if you wanted to.

Author's Response: I could get a couple out, but its more of a one-shot introduction for a the character, she's featured in a different story, ...which has escaped me at the moment, but I wanted to bring her out a little, it is going to be edited.


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