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Review:Miranda says:
I read this yesterday, but didn't get a chance to review it!
This story left me totally speechless. The emotional depth was amazing! The song was a nice touch, fit the story very well. It with out a doubt deserved the A! The descriptions of the park at the different times of the year were super duper! lol I could picture them perfectly in my mind!
He disappeared through the thickening fog; the glistening snowflakes creating a blizzard between us. “I loved you too…” I whispered through the howling wind, it sounded like ravenous wolves getting to my heart; my black hole of a heart.

I could see the dead flower beds, the last black rose petal falling slowly, it standing out as it landed on the snowy earth. I could see the bare trees; no leaves were stopping them from shivering, the willow tree was just a clump of spindly branches but upon the branches of bigger trees, icicles were hanging and weeping tears of melted water, just as I cried.
Those two quotes really got to me. I was crying when I read them! They sent shivers down my spine(in a good way) This really was such a beautiful story! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank yooh! Thank yooh! THANK YOOH!
I'm totally speecless by ur review! Thank yooh soooooooooo much!!! :)
I loved writing this even though I never intended for it to end up on HPFF, but then I changed eveything and it worked! I was really happy with the result! Eespcially since the magic thing was hard to put into it and of course tryin to keep the "guy" a secret... but we all know who it is know, right! ;)
Right at the end of this, I was really crying, throughout the original and even rewriting it to fit on to here! I'm just glad yooh like it and yooh thinks it's worth the A! :)

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