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Review:dim at best says:
Okay, so this is definitely a late review, but better late than never, right? Anyways...

ZOMG HARRY YOU GIGANTIC DUNDERHEAD!!! I am sooo mad at him right now. Cho, I expected nothing better of the sleaze, but HARRY?! What the DEUCE?! Why does he have to be such a gigantically thick, easily manipulated, hormone-driven, BOY?! I mean goodness! Listen to Bill! Put together why everyone hates you! Write a frickin' letter to Ginny! * screams in extreme frustration and runs away from computer screen to sulk/mutter incoherent mean thoughts at Harry *

Whew. So, getting back to my sane side...

The chapter was brilliantly put together jumping from Ginny's POV to Harry's. The two ongoing scenes complimented each other, as Harry went from loving Ginny to going with Cho; and Ginny went from being indifferent from Harry to needing him. It's all just so tragic..

I'm sooo pumped to read the next chapter and see how little Eloise Hermione is doing more grown up. I was pleased at how you handled Ginny's naming of her daughter, how she made the child all hers and not an ounce of Harry's. From not naming her Lily, to not giving her 'Potter' as a last name, to even claiming the father as unknown. It was all so Ginny-ish to do and I'm proud of her, even if it's hurting my fave ship.

Brilliant update, and I can't wait to read the next one!

- Terri

Author's Response: Honestly, late reviews are wonderful, they are a little present! You can review anytime you want :)

Ah yes, Harry gave into his male instincts, and went straight to Cho, the silly idiot! I know, if he had questioned Bill harder he may have been there for Eloise's birth. However that is not how the plot goes, so I guess I will forgive him this once!

I am glad that the jumping POV's were okay. I tried to make major events happening in their lives sort of play off each other.

I am excited to write Eloise she is going to be fun to tackle. I am glad that you liked how I handled the baby naming, that was the one thing I knew I had to do! Ginny is raising this child alone and therefore everything she chooses to do is going to reflect her.

Thank you for this lovely amazing review! I will do my best to update soon! Thank you again so much! *huggles*

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