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Review:Mariska says:
I would make this a bit longer for the first chapter. I wasn't hooked to read it after I finished it. Yes I wanted to know who Sirius' wife was, but I wasn't intrigued enough.

You descriptions are better than some's though.

Keep working, and may your pen stay sharp!

Mariska

Author's Response: My first chapters usually have some kind of hook in them to make people want to come back, but I wanted to try something different. I'm pleased with this chapter though. I'm glad you read it though. Thank you for the review and the description compliment!

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