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Review:ChizzaLazty says:
Pimple-kingdom... lol! "It was the most biggest week of my life." In the first chapter you said that it was a month until she'd begin school, and now it's a week?:P

Why didn't she go to Lily's house? I mean, they were friends, why not go to her place instead of Sirius', when she didn't even know Sirius all that well. Oh well, I know it's part of the main plot so I won't complain:P Nice chapter again :)

Author's Response: I wrote week because it was meant to show how much time she had spent at Sirius's and Jame's. Like in the second chapter, I think, James comes over near the end of the holidays. So that means they went to James's house even later.

And she went to Sirius's house because it was only next door and she had to leave quickly. And yeah, it was a main part in the plot.
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