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Review:0MFGZshes__DEADLY says:
Awwh, that's so sad!! I love how you used the quote, it works great.

At first, when you were describing the two of them in the rain, I thought the guy was Harry, until she asked if Harry was gone. I'm kind of glad it wasn't. =] Props to you for shaking it up.

My favorite part was the very last. When you describe Neville's feelings at the reception. And then the very last line, “Mummy, when will Daddy be home?” That made me tear up so bad, I'm not even kidding.

I liked it a lot. Very well done. =D

Author's Response: Ohh I'm so glad you liked it. Yeah, I didn't want to reveal who it was until like the end of it all, so people would expect it was Harry or Ron but it really wasn't.

Ohh I'm glad you liked it, I had to get help for the ending (thank you again Mrs_heather_grint)

Thank you :)

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