Well I said i'd check out your stories and here I am. I thought i'd read this first since it caught my attention. I really enjoyed this story, it really keeps the readers attention. I liked the paragraph where Malfoy explains his 'seating plan' lol Wouldn't he have put Hermione on the floor though because (In his eyes) she's nothing but scum and dirt, that she
doesn't even have the right to stand up?
“You’re going nowhere,” Draco informed him smoothly. “You’re going to die in this room.”
I found that line by Malfoy so chilling, it's really good. Also Malfoy's reason for his whole revenge, been that Harry rejected him on the Hogwarts train, and also that the three (especially Harry) put Lucious Malfoy in Azkaban, is while typical and a good reason in malfoy's eyes, seems so humorous to me, I don't really know why.
It's sad how Ron died, and so unfair too! Made me kind of sad.
Harry smiled. He remembered his earlier theory – if you have no weapon, use words. “Well, I mean, you’re a complete failure, aren’t you? Look at you . . .standing here, a murderer. Do you really think your parents would be proud? I mean, really? You betrayed your friends, ambushed us, tied us up and then attempted to kill us off one by one. That’s the mark of a coward.”
While what harry said is true about what Malfoy is doing is been cowardly, I do have to agree that Malfoy's parents probably wouldn't care if Malfoy killed Harry, Ron and Hermione, in fact i think they'd be proud! Gosh Malfoy's death is horrible! Although sad in a way. I can't blame Hermione and Harry for killing him, espcially Hermione, what Malfoy had Crabbe and Goyle do to Hermione was terribble!
All in all I really enjoyed this story, well done. Now i've got to read some of your other stories ;) And just so you know i've updated :)
Author's Response: Ooooh, thanks for checking this out!! It's a bit cold and sinister, isn't it? Lol, just my kind of thing.
Ah, wasn't Hermione pinned up or something though, cause she doesn't have the right to do anything at all, as she's a Mudblood - well, according to Draco?
Yeah, his idea is of revenge is kind of pathetic, you know, the whole - "you're dead for what you've done to my father" thing. Really, he needs to get a life - like as if Harry's worth his time!! Ron dying? Lol, you'll soon come to see that I hate Ron - killing him off is no problem to me. For a laugh, me and my friend belong to a "I Hate Ron" club - we're the top two members!!
Yes, you're right - or at least, I think so. I mean, I wouldn't expect his parents to care either; they would probably applaud him for killing off the trio. Yeah, I like writing grusome stuff - you should check out my other account, Starri Nite, where I co-write with a friend, "Lost and Stranded, Life as a Muggle." I mean, actually, you probably shouldn't; it's REALLY grusesome, lol. Draco's my fav character to write in fanfics, other than Cedric and my original characters, so it was a difficult thing to do, killing him off.
Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I will certainly come and check your stuff out, but I have SO many essays to do at the moment, I'll have to put it off for now. Thanks so much, and I'll be around to your account soon.