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Review:absolument says:
I really like this! my only criticism is that, in my opinion, it comes off unfair to Lily. she seems a bit manipulative. i think this would be completely eliminated if there was more explanation but that isn’t really the point of a One-Shot, i suppose. otherwise, this story is beautifully written to express the moments you chose and the dialogue is really good.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.

About Lily being manipulitive, I don't really see that as much. To me it was both of them. She came back to Sirius the night before her wedding because she was probebly thinking like alot of women do on their wedding night. 'What if...?' she was asking herself.

Thank you. :)

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