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Review:Weasley twins rock says:
As you asked about the fourth chapter in the forums I will tell you honestly what I think. I couldn't quite follow the happenings all the way through, I had to go back and read it again (maybe I am just slow). Perhaps the reviewer you mentioned had the same problem as me. You just need to go through the discussion between Dumbledore and Snape, Dumbledore's words are clear and understandable but in patches Snape is confusing. It is a good discussion just needs a tiny bit of tweaking. If you need any help ask on the forum again or ask someone who will beta it for you.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you. I needed a second point of view. Now I know I have to edit that chapter, especially Snape's parts. I'll do it before I'll add the last chapter - some sort of epilogue, in fact. And I'll ask a beta to do his/her magic for me.
Happy holidays!

Anne


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