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Review:Pretty Purple Pelican says:
snugly layers.
^I'm pretty sure that it would snug layers, wouldn't it?

Its sunshine out
^There's sunshine out...

There were a few others, here and there, but I'm exhausted and don't have the energy to pluck them out. Just give it a read-over.

I loved the scene with the girls. For some reason, I really like that you described the one girl's voice as "breathy". I could totally hear how that sounded. Good word. Good chapter.

You should really try to update more quickly :(

Author's Response: Will change the snugly layers, but with sunshine, I was hoping to sort of have the girl say that... oh, well, I'm change it. You rock my socks off;; you're like my review beta!!!

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