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Review:Abhorsen says:
The flashbacks were very well done. I enjoyed them immensely, as well as the parting and the description of the nursery was very good. However, some of the story was not very vividly described, and it was difficult at times to picture what was happening. Overall, a good chapter.

Author's Response: Hmm. I didn't really concentrate on description when I first wrote this. I really should, but I think when I was writing this, I was in a "use-simple-language" mood? Heh. I should probably go back and rework some more description into the story. Well, I'm glad you liked the flashbacks and chapter overall. Thanks for the reviews! :]

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