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Review:Misty_Rey says:
Hehehe, the watch was the portkey huh? Soren sure is an arse. You're pace of the story seems to be slow and steady but I would have liked a bit more description. Aah well, maybe that comes later ^_^.

Author's Response: Devious little bugger, isn't he? This is actually a section of the story that I wanted to find a way to rework. I like the notion of the portkey - that he was testing her and, if she did as he thought she would and held it close, she would be brought to his flat, but i think i may have accidentally included one too many magical connotations in this watch that i never really flushed out in pursuit of the plots greater point. Maybe when i've finished Extempore and I have some time to dedicate to a piece of fanfiction that isn't that one, i'll take a serious shake at re-writing the aspects of this story that i'm uncomfortable wtih. Either way, thank you for your review and I'm glad you're enjyoing it. It's nice to get a review, every once in a while, that doesn't start out with copious amounts of confusion - not that i mind confused readers, but it can make you feel like a crappy writer :P

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