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Review:mrs_heather_grint says:
Here for reporting duty :]. I’ll just type this up in another box as I go, so if it seems out of order…don’t get confused :].

I liked how you mentioned that danger wasn’t abnormal at that time, but I think Molly, being the Molly that we all know and love, would be a bit more…concerned.

I laughed when you had Molly offer to cut Ron’s hair…sooo like her.

I liked reading a story about the kids going off to war in a mother’s point of view. In the books, it always seems like the mothers aren’t protective of Hermione and Ron. But I liked how you showed that Molly thought they were far too young, but knew they had to go.

I loved the symbolism of the stone. It glowed warm when Ron put it on…but once he was dead…it was cold. Very nice. I’m almost crying here.

Okay, now I’m done and I can stop commentating and get down to the real reviewing.

I obviously like this story, I was crying. There were a few typos, and I once noticed that you typed “/” instead of “.”. No problem though; nothing that can’t be fixed by yourself or a beta. Also, at the end, I was a bit confused. Did Bill die? Whose neck did she put the necklace around? Ron’s? I loved the “they were her heroes” thing. I feel horrible for Molly. She’s such an emotional woman anyway, and to lose to of her sons at the same time…

Very nice story. Well done, if not a little short. Thanks for sharing it with me! 9/10.

Author's Response: Oh thanks! I love long reviews and you did it so quickly :D

Thank you for all the good and bad things you pointed out, soon I hope to change all of them to imporve this all.

Thank you for a great review :)

Almost_witch

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