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Review:QuidditchSeeker says:
'Narcissa Black-Malfoy was supposed to be the epitome of perfection, nothing less.'
SUCH a good line.
God, I've been waiting for you to post to this story for so long. You can't believe how shocked I was when I went into my favorites and saw this was the top of my list!
This was such a great chapter, the way Narcissa has lost everything, the way she still wants to try and be what she was supposed to be, the way she still cared.
And OH I just loved the scene where she meets Lucius. I imagine that's how he would act towards a young teenage girl, so smooth and charming. I especially like how you showed Bellatrix teasing her and Andromeda warning her. It makes me think of my own family (except it'd be my brother teasing me).
'“---was Draco…” Narcissa said bitterly, refusing to look at the photo. “He was my Draco, my dragon, my little b-boy…” Her voice cracked again.'
I know in my story Narcissa is very cold towards Draco, but I still love the way you've portrayed her here. I especially like how you have her call him 'my dragon'.
Over all, a very very very good chapter.
QS

Author's Response: Hooray. Thank you so much for reviewing. Your reviews always make me smile. :]

Heh. It took me a while (a very long while) to write this chapter since I've been busy and all.

Narcissa... she's very... hm. sad? I pity her. And envy her. Because she got Lucius and his amazing blonde hairness. Haha. Thank you again for the review!


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