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Review:luckistars says:
Once more, the introduction of many names confused me. Maybe I just have trouble with names...

"Soon, however, it was time to go home, and the Matthews headed for the Muggle side of the street, while the others passed around the Floo powder and returned to their homes. "

I think that it could have been worded differently, I don't know why, but I was bothered by the use of 'home' twice in that sentence.

Author's Response: You're right. I'll try to change the wording of that sentence. Thanks for the advice.

The names, yeah. I've had a few people mention that, but I'm not quite sure what I can do about it. It is only the first two chapters and it's not really necessary to remember everybody, but I could see how it could be confusing. *thinks*

Thanks for reviewing and for the advice. I'll have to think about the names part.

Hope you continue reading despite the confusion.

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