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Review:luckistars says:
This seemed very interesting, but you didn't give time to thoroughly introduce the characters. Also, I was confused with the usage of 'Ron' and 'Ginny', and then 'James' so I didn't know what time period it was. Different names might have clarified. You could have some explanation issues but with a little work, you could do fine!

Author's Response: Yeah, this is the third story about these characters, so some of the first couple of chapters are a little hard to follow without having read the previous stories, I think. I see what you mean about explanation. I suppose I have to assume that many readers have not read the other stories. I'll see what I can do about that.

I did think I mentioned that Ginny was the mother, though. I'll have to check that.

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