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Review:MargaretLane says:
This story sounds like it is going to be pretty much what I was looking for-a child of canon character or original character starting Hogwarts and their story. It's surprisingly hard to find one that isn't either humour or romance.

I really liked the beginning of this chapter. You started it really dramatically. I figured out pretty quickly that it was the last battle that she was dreaming of. It is very well written, too.

I'm quite intrigued as to why Ella is dreaming of an event that I assume took place before she was born to somebody that is no relation to her. I am also intrigued as to what it is that her parents haven't told her. I suspect Harry may be dead in this story and I am looking forward to finding out the answers to these things.

Just one thing: first years at Hogwarts are not allowed their own brooms. Has that rule been changed since Harry left Hogwarts? If so, I think there should be some mention of it, if it's only Ron saying "of course we had to use those old school brooms" or something. (I'm sure you could think of a better way to put it than that, but you know what I mean).

Good start to the story.

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