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Review:Bibbs says:
LOL!

I loved the little bits of humor through it, like when Remus thought that Hermione thought he was going to cry. And I loved some of the descriptions, Remus wanting to "sample" the wet spot from when she bit her lip. XP

Speaking of descriptions... they were wonderful. I realized while I was reading that this was all taking place in a matter of a few minutes and I was really surprised at how well you put it into words without dragging it out too long. I think the first person is really fitting here because we get to see what's going through Remus's head and we can relate easier.

His characterization was brilliant and all of his thoughts were realistic and...slightly awkward, which I thought was just so charming, a man of his age. He can be so stubborn at times. I love him.

Hermione was excellent as well, though I don't really..."get" her, if you know what I mean. Not in your fic, I mean, I'm just generally not really "into" Hermione. But I think you did well with her characterization. She was equally stubborn (even more so, in fact) and I love the concern she shows because...if Hermione is anything, that's it. Worrying about house elves of all things, and its nice that Remus is aware that she is the only one who realized he didn't eat or anything.

I'm having a mighty fine ramble, aren't I? It was lovely, everything about it. :)

Author's Response: You dont ramble :) I'm really glad that you liked it, I'm always very aware that Remus/Hermione is not everyones cup of tea, even if its mine :) I love writing about Remus, hes always been my fave to write about, and as for Hermione i love her too. I have always liked the little things about peoples behavior, observences, and eye movements because they tell us so much about the people we are trying to understand. I like to include the fact that sometimes those observences can be seen in a wrong light, like Hermiones assumptions. And I agree, she is definately all about the concern and caring, shes very empathic I think. I did really enjoy writing that piece, it gave me a great sense of pleasure once linda convinced me to put it up. Thank you for your observations too :P It means alot coming from someone I know loves Remus as I do. :)

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