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Review:Snitchsista says:
WOW!!!

That was sooo amazing, Renee.

It really was.

I loved everything about it- but don't be afraid to test out some more description. It's obvious you have talent, just describe maybe a tinse bit more? Sorry. :( I'm really not having a go, I just like to try and help.

10/10!

I loved this line-

“We will be traveling by floo powder as usual, Neville please attempt to exit the fire place in the Leaky Cauldron without making a mess this time, I couldn’t look Tom in the face for a week after the chaos you created on our last visit.”

LOL!!!!

x :) x


Author's Response: Hiya Snitch ^^

I'm realy happy that you are enjoying the story, and I agree, I realy do need to use more description, though in my defence - this was written about a year ago (I know how shocking a wait that is for an update lol).

Yea, in this chapter that woudl have to be my favourite line. I was trying to express how clumsy Neville is and portray some more of his grans personality to give his life a bit more depth then the books go into.

most people i know arnt Neville fans, but i realy liked the idea or writing about him as there is so much left to the readers imagination in the books, as If i continue to follow my plans, I can write prety much anyhting I want, as long as I include the key interations with the main charactors from the book just to show the world what i think Neville is realy ment to be like.

Anyway, off to read your other review now, and cant wait for your next chapter :P



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