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Review:firebreathingradishes says:
Ohhh this story is so sad and lovely. I love the concept of the story--- Sirius walking through the rubble and piecing all the bits and echoes of James's and Lily's last moments. It's so sadd and lovely (at the same time, I know!). *tear*

There are a couple grammatical typos here and there. "Lord Voldemort’ cold icy voice " should be "Lord Voldemort's..." and "Harry’s Nursery".. "Nursery" shouldn't be capitalized. "made the hair on James and Lily’s neck stand up."--- "hair" should be "hairs". Those were all the ones I spotted. We all make errors now and then. Nothing a good beta won't fix!

I don't think this idea was farfetched at all. I thought it was really amazing. It echoes and "imprints" of James and Lily... of course it would be heard by Sirius, their best friend. :] Lovely work!



Author's Response: Yeah, i do have beta, but i havent heard from her in weeks, and plus, im usually quite good with my grammar, but it tends to catch me out now and again, and it was soo tired yesterday, (but thats no excuse). Anyway, glad you liked it and it wasnt far fetched, i was worried about that...
thankyou for reviewing!!


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