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Review:firebreathingradishes says:
Wow.

"Marcus gave a bark of laughter, 'You? His second best Death Eater? That's a laugh, Malfoy. You're not a kid anymore; this is more then just getting on the Quidditch Team. This is murder – and if you don't succeed, the Dark Lord's taking your life. Much as I want the Dark Lord to be happy, I wouldn't mind if you didn't succeed,' he made his way towards the door and opened it up. 'In fact, I hope you fail so that I can witness your pathetic, insignificant death. No one would care Malfoy – no one would care if you died.'"

You write dialogue so realistically! And I love how Draco can manage to manipulate almost everyone (Flint and Borgin).

And hurrah for more Kayla and Draco interaction. I can't wait to see how they.. um.. develop together. X]

I also like how Draco made mistakes when he was younger with Terry Boot, etc. It's very different. It shows that Draco can be human. Or at least he acted more human when he was younger.

Great work! Keep writing!


Author's Response: Yey!
You think I write it realistically? Really?
Yes, Draco has learned about manipulation from the best...
Kayla and Draco...I know, I adore them already. But let me warn you -- I'm not the type of person who gets the people together by chapter ten. I write long, and hard and they don't get together for a while. It's just my way.
When he was younger he didn't realize what the consequences were. He was just a kid who wanted a friend.
Keep reading!


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