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Review:Noblevyne says:
Wow delta, I've never read anything of yours before and I'm starting to think I've been missing out! What beautiful imagery and use of language you have, those opening paragraphs are gorgeous (as are the rest, but those opening ones set the tone very well).

To be truthful, I'd never thought about a Hannah/Ernie pairing but it makes sense, doesn't it? You draw the character of Ernie very well through Hannah's memory, I like that his stubborn pride was both a flaw and a positive - it's what drove him to stand up for Harry, to fight with him, to do the pompous, noble thing and die. Youd didn't shy away from the fact that he was a bit of prat and that works in your favour.

I also really loved the description of how death had become such a regular thing for Hannah, such a trivilaity - it's very realistic and completely horrible to think that all these characters we love will have their innocence corrupted by this war.

To sum up: thank you for writing this, you gave life to a couple of characters who are so easily skimmed over in the books and made me really enjoy the way you write them.

Author's Response: Thanks for the loverly review, Noblevyne! I had a lot of fun writing this and thought a lot about war and love and death in the process. The descriptions and utter and bleak sadness that penetrates this is a result of my penchant for continual, unrelenting angst and endless description. ;) I'm really happy that you like the way I portrayed death, war, and Ernie. Taking an unshaped character like him and turning his life into a story was fun and stimulating - especially since I wrote this completely different thing on Ernie before I decided it was trash and started over. :P

Thanks again for your kind words. I'd like to thank all of you guys again, for this wonderful site dedicated to Harry Potter fanfiction, where writers and readers can enjoy a place where our imaginations can run scot-free. You guys are truly amazing and deserving of our unending thanks.

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