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Review:the_artful_dodger says:
This looks to be like it will be a fantastic story! The plot seems really good so far! I hope you do the character of Severus right because sooo many authors get him wrong and I love him so I always notice. Which reminds me: kinda cool/funny that you have girl in an arranged marriage with him because I happen to have a story that just happens to be about that! =) Anywho... I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Now, if you're not into constuctive criticism, I would stop reading because that's what's coming.... after the first chapter I was little let-down by the second. The writing was worse on the second and you should really space between paragraphs. There were also writing/grammar/other type mistakes... "Were coming mom"

Author's Response: thanx for the review. soz if you got let down on the second chappie and i hav never realli been one for grammar, i suc at it. i will try as hard as possible to get the character right, and im sorry if i do. thanx again.
Holly (one of the two infamous and crazy mini_marauders)

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