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Review:firebreathingradishes says:
Another excellently written piece! I must say, I've been anticipating reading this story ever since I've seen it as a story shell on your author's page.

There are sooo many lines that just jumped out at me.
"A faith, that my parents led me to believe was right; only I should have known the truth. For my parents never did what was right – they did what was easy."
"But, just as my parents had always told me I would, I was sorted into Slytherin."
"That he and I were not all that different from each other."

There are so many more, but if I keep on copying and pasting quotes into my review, this one would be miles long! :P

Oh! And when I read this "If you took the time to look, however, you would notice a small charred spot on our family tree.", I was like, yay! Title of your other story! :DDD

Regulus is brilliantly characterized. He is so ... regretful. Idk if that even makes sense, but I really like the aura around him. Heyyy, I like 'em tragic. ;]

Okay, there are a couple of typos that caught my attention here and there. For instance, "my two cousins and they're husbands". It should be "their". Just letting you know! We all let these little bits slip when we're writing.

I like how Bellatrix told Regulus about Voldy's secrets, thinking that he wanted to be a top DE like she was. It shows a more... "naive" or umm.. (trying to find a word!) a very eager, ready-to-serve Bellatrix. If that makes sense.

Great work! You are wondeful writer! :DDD

Author's Response: You are -- seriously -- becoming my favorite author/reviewer on HPFF, you know that right?
Regretful Regulus. Sounds a like, don't you think?
I'm glad you liked this story. When I found the challenge I just HAD to do it (it was my first challenge ever) and I was considering who to write about and I saw a post about RAB and I was like...Regulus Black! Aha!
You know? One of those 'eureka' moments.
Thank you, once again!

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