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Review:almost_witch says:
I just wanna say well done for putting in your readers thoughts into fixing your fic. It was such a wise thing to do and more people should take a leaf out of your book.

Also before I continue I just had tospot out this line - '"Celebrate..." the Dark Lord cried. "Another has come to serve me."'

It shows just how up him self Voldemort really is in such little words, I just loved that one. *smiles*

I liked your theroy too - although this time I am not convinced that Draco was in the order it's a good idea to show your new ideas, - i like how you do that in your writting.

Your spelling was fine, your length was just bordering it but again your packed so much into it and you describe things just fine.

You have a particular talent for the dark arts so streach it out to every inch, maybe even try a chaptered fic - I can see that working for you.

well done


Author's Response: This story is placed a few months after HBP ends. Not sure what JKR has in mind for her chars, but I am hoping I'm on the right track. This story is what inspired my Summer Series. I haven't gotten to the placement of this one shot in that stroy yet though. TY again my dear for reviewing. huggles ~~juls

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