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Review:almost_witch says:
This was cute, poor Lily and the wedding gitters! I understand what that must be like and how hard that must be on her.

May I say the only problem I found, I did find that James and Lily could be a little OOC... only because of that whole 'I love you,' thing all the time, they seemed too cute and cuddly, not like the Lily and James I am used to reading. Prehaps cut a little more of it out and make them a little bit tougher. Or maybe this is your style in writting the James and Lily we dont know so well?

Anyway the plot and length is just fine, same with spelling and everything. I don't know what else to say but maybe people decriptions onto people a little more?

Otherwise its all good.

Almost_witch

Author's Response: Wedding jitters are never good!!!

Anyways, the whole lobey-dovey thing is well... Its their wedding. And yeah, I know they are totally OOC in this one, but I wanted to let people know that true love is eternal.

Okay, your critique makes a whole lot of sense, thank you!

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