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Review:Pretty Purple Pelican says:
"darker then usually.".
^It should be "usual". I love the talk about the auras, though. It adds just the right touch to it.

The grammar and everything is much better, so major props to you. The only thing that stuck out, and I'm not sure if I mentioned this before, is after someone speaks, you capitalize "He said" or whatever. It is supposed to be lowercase. That's about it, though.

Ehehehe. *spastic giggles* Mm. I like Tom. He is one sexy future Dark Lord.

P.S. You should have more reviews.




Author's Response: Definitley sexy. I swear, if he had his 16-year-old look with his power, he could get me to join the Death Eaters any time.
Thanks again for the grammar! I went back and corrected it.
PS - I wish people would review. I guess some are just to lazy.
THANKS!!!!

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