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Review:JolieFille252 says:
*in the opening lines, 'worse' should be 'worst' ;)

"...I should have set a dungbomb off in the middle of the ceremony, just for old times sake.” Sirius Black joked loudly. oh

aww, cute ending. :P this was interesting; I'm used to reading (and writing) more abstract one-shots with less activity going on. I liked the storyline you had going here, but am wondering if it would've worked better as a short story...maybe spread over 2-3 chapters...make more room to explore the *reasons* behind lily's flip-out, giving a background for it and such. but in any case, this was a nice little story; good job!

Author's Response: Whoopsies, Spelling error... :P

Thank you... I really couldn't think of anything more to make it 2-3... Why, I barely could make it into the oneshot. Anyways, thank you for the critique and the review!!!

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